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Reviews For: Trapped
fren chi
2004-11-22
ch 1, 		abuselol liked the sly smashing pumpkins blagging. i am not sure about "the world is my oyster. i never did like seafood" seems strained and drags the poem down but i reli like the "release is what i crave" line. not bad.
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