You have a way with emotion and expression. I wish I could write more like you.

Hobbit of Doom

Wonderful, beautiful. The imagery is very good and raw, however, it wuold likely disgust people who haven't experienced this... (I understand though.) Very avid capturing of what it's truly like. _

Kepp it up, you're wonderful. _

Darling.. please tell me you didn't... It hurts so much more to know that i can't be there for you this long painful weekend... just one more day my love and i'll be there for you... Please be strong.

I Love

Very deep yet very interesting. I was so much into this poem from begining to end. good job. write more soon

Hmm, this is pretty good, actually. Not one of the best I read, but yeah, I like it.