GOD this is scary. Sorry. I reviewed one of your other poems saying you got me... well it's almost as if you ARE me. It's scary.

Oh wow! Definitely going under my favorite stories list! The last stanza made me shiver. Two thumbs up!

wow! that was really good!!

Good point, I'm single so I don't have that problem though :-)

I really like the imagery here. "All metal and eyeliner," is a great line. The third stanza makes me all teary-eyed. Well done.

That's a really nice poem. You're a very talented writer.

Heartfelt and honest, you have a true gift with detail and imagry.Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.