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| silvermoonsparkling 2005-05-15 ch 1,  | abuseGOD this is scary. Sorry. I reviewed one of your other poems saying you got me... well it's almost as if you ARE me. It's scary. |
| Meems 2005-05-03 ch 1, | abuseOh wow! Definitely going under my favorite stories list! The last stanza made me shiver. Two thumbs up! |
| Aimers 2004-12-05 ch 1, | abusewow! that was really good!! |
| Passage 2004-12-01 ch 1, | abuseGood point, I'm single so I don't have that problem though :-) |
| DukDog27 2004-11-25 ch 1, | abuseI really like the imagery here. "All metal and eyeliner," is a great line. The third stanza makes me all teary-eyed. Well done. |
| Anais 2004-11-23 ch 1, | abuseThat's a really nice poem. You're a very talented writer. |
| Faithless Juliet 2004-11-23 ch 1, | abuseHeartfelt and honest, you have a true gift with detail and imagry.Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |