i loved the language you used on this one. ("..the warmth playing upon you isn't the sun's rays, but the smoldering coarps of a silently pleading comrade." and "i don't believe in god anymore-for i have already been damned to hell."--my favorite lines.) please read and review my stuff (i have some new ones)

koolies i haven't dun mine yet n its 7:45 due in tomoz so i think i best get started lolanyway nice poetic writin lol