holy crap.. sorry.. i was thinking about this kinda thing today because there is aguy who likes me and im not sure if i want to get involved.. because of who he is.. a guy.. and its love and its just been made out to not last.. well done

The last part brought an interesting twist. Personally I believe that falling in love has only 10% emotion in it and 90% choice. Most don't agree, but that's how I see it. You've brought in some through provoking questions... Does one lose one's identity while in love? Well written.

Nice work. Really like this.

Powerful and passionate, I love it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.