   Poetrybay 2005-07-13 . chapter 1This is a beautiful poem you have propose here this poem shows alot of emtions in it really shows in your work. |
 Crazy Biene 2005-01-25 . chapter 1LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! |
 Saeger 2004-11-30 . chapter 1Wow... It can be interpreted a few ways. But it was nicely done. |
 Jennacharm 2004-11-24 . chapter 1pain and gained in the same sentence is kind of awkward. Not bad though overall.- Jennacharm |
 Aslan Israel 2004-11-24 . chapter 1Very emotional. Wonderful job. |
 Faithless Juliet 2004-11-23 . chapter 1Powerful and passionate, keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet. |
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