Oh, I didn't realise the length of this chapter when I was beta-ing it! It's good, the longer the better!

Wow, this is fantastic. The description is intense and I miss all this deep fantasy. I'm yearning to go back to it and write it properly. You bring the right sensuality to it.

Oh and lol about the Pamishna being an anagram of Pashmina =P

*grins* Good work Skippy. ;)

Very good. Can't wait till another chapter is updated.

please! i love this story! please keep writing and send out chapters as quickly as possible! You should get published!

Wow! I'm just liking this more and more. I want to read the next chapter! Please update soon.

I really like this a lot. I especially love the descriptions of the soil, trees and animals.

Hey, this is really good! Your descriptions are really well written. I'll definitely read more of this!

YAY! Oh man, i really love this story. PLease please please keep up the good work and don't ever think it's crappy, because I love it! -gives thumbs up-

This story has an irresistable plot and realistic characters, I hope you update soon...

Wow... Excellent, excellent, story you have going here!

Excellent story so far. It's very interesting, hope that you update soon.

x A-S x

O! Creepy~ But I liked it a lot. Keep it up and I can't wait to read more.

Oh, I like it.

This seems very interesting so far. Please update soon, I'll be waiting!