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Reviews For: Beach Time
anastasia 2005-03-01 . chapter 1
o ah
Nirvanasteve 2004-11-27 . chapter 1
What Folly trash! SCOFF! SCOFF!
Carradine 2004-11-24 . chapter 1
No it's not; it's just a memory, or a dream sequence.

But it's good. Kinda reminds me of a haiku I like.
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