that's really good. sorry i haven't *reviewed* in a while. i love your new style - it has more angst, which i guess you know as my favorite :-) one thing: i think the use of the word "cancer" is a little odd in context, so don't try to force rhymes. however, that's just my opinion. have a great thanksgiving!

its like a song..i'd use it for lyrics. i really like it tho...its different then other 'love' poems but really good.