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| A.R. Twilight 2005-01-03 ch 1, | abuseToo many curses! Still a great story. Keep it up! (Title needs help, though... No offence) |
| Nikolomagne 2004-12-14 ch 1, | abuseAH! I WANT CHAPTER TWO! This is a VERY good prologue and an excellent outline of the story. Like everything you right, this has great potential to become a fully fledged novel. Keep writing! |