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| Estelin 2008-07-12 ch 11,  | abusethis was excellent. keep up the good work and writing. maybe you could check out my story philosopher acres farm. |
| Strangely Natural 2007-09-19 ch 11, | abuseIt was cute and sad, it ended too quickly for me, oh well. |
| gummybearmurder 2007-05-07 ch 3, | abuseKay, so I've already ready the entire story, but I just picked a chapter to review.. But anyways, I LOVED it. It was adorable in an odd kind of way. :) |
| Keir16 2005-07-12 ch 11, | abuseOMG! you ended this really soon, but it was really good, i liked it a lot |
| stuart347 2005-07-12 ch 1, | abuseaverige first chapter, no direction or real indacation of things to come. Souless. |
| Seraindipity 2005-06-08 ch 11, | abuseWhat a delightfully pointless, underdeveloped, but wonderfully amusing and fun to read story with fun characters! I liked, it, surprisingly, and I'd give you advice but I already know you've improved, so yeah. |
| iubar 2005-05-21 ch 7, | abuseIt is so easy to tell that you are 13. If you want a story with more veracity, try making the events plausible and spaced out, thus adding a realism that you are missing.You seem to have a sense of humor, though, which saves this story from utter destruction. |
| GothicBallerina 2005-05-15 ch 11, | abusei really liked it but i wish you didn't end it. |
| gonnabefamous 2005-05-14 ch 11, | abuseOh gosh I am so sorry if i did it I really didn't mean ** as an insult I was just playing. I am REALLY sorry if it was me. Sorry again if it was me but I like your story and wish you'ld keep writing. Oh and could you well not say my name over the net it kind of freaks me out you know. Aziza |
| ChocolateSugar 2005-05-12 ch 1, | abuseyour story from the first chapter seemed pretty good, but it was really short. just try to make the next chapters longer. though you've already completed this so, i'm not sure why im telling yout this. you asked for reviews though so i did review |
| Li'l Jazz Babe 2005-05-12 ch 11, | abuseU rock! I am 13 too, and I love **! Do you know any good websites on the internet with bondage literature or on fictionpress? |
| anon 2005-04-21 ch 9, anon. | abusethat 'N’lee' name is dumb as ** |
| doragon41 2005-04-17 ch 10, | abuseyou atleast have to do an umm ending chapter thiny...*cough* yes because you cant just leave us hanging. please...i just want a "and everyone lived happily ever after" chapter...please? |
| Alleyway Cat 2005-04-16 ch 10, | abuseYou bad, bad SugarPee. Me no like cliffies, especially in yummy fics like this. |
| Jameela 2005-04-09 ch 10, anon. | abuseI luved it! |