this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing. maybe you could check out my story
philosopher acres farm.

It was cute and sad, it ended too quickly for me, oh well.

Kay, so I've already ready the entire story, but I just picked a chapter to review.. But anyways, I LOVED it. It was adorable in an odd kind of way. :)

OMG! you ended this really soon, but it was really good, i liked it a lot

averige first chapter, no direction or real indacation of things to come. Souless.

What a delightfully pointless, underdeveloped, but wonderfully amusing and fun to read story with fun characters! I liked, it, surprisingly, and I'd give you advice but I already know you've improved, so yeah.

It is so easy to tell that you are 13. If you want a story with more veracity, try making the events plausible and spaced out, thus adding a realism that you are missing.You seem to have a sense of humor, though, which saves this story from utter destruction.

i really liked it but i wish you didn't end it.

Oh gosh I am so sorry if i did it I really didn't mean ** as an insult I was just playing. I am REALLY sorry if it was me. Sorry again if it was me but I like your story and wish you'ld keep writing. Oh and could you well not say my name over the net it kind of freaks me out you know.

Aziza

your story from the first chapter seemed pretty good, but it was really short. just try to make the next chapters longer. though you've already completed this so, i'm not sure why im telling yout this. you asked for reviews though so i did review

U rock! I am 13 too, and I love **! Do you know any good websites on the internet with bondage literature or on fictionpress?

that 'N’lee' name is dumb as **

you atleast have to do an umm ending chapter thiny...*cough* yes because you cant just leave us hanging. please...i just want a "and everyone lived happily ever after" chapter...please?

You bad, bad SugarPee. Me no like cliffies, especially in yummy fics like this.

I luved it!