Wow, that was really amazing. Very beautiful. I like how there's feeling and rythem in it. Keep writting.

PS-Thank you for the review you sent to the poem Love Me Not. And i like your writting style too.

I REALLY like this! its very descriptive, deep, and kinda has a warm feel to it. its made its way to my fave's list!

I LOVE this. some forced lines, but overall, very well done, and witty concept. Good work!

this is a nice poem as well...good job rhyming!

He he nice! Love uneasy ease, something so cool about the irony/way it sounds is so cool. Love the rest of the poem too, think the beginning is better than the end but cant place why. Love all the images and smells, tastes etc you use! Well done.

I find this somehow really beautiful. Nicely x