That's a beautiful poem. I'm so glad I read it! :)

I love the first stanza..I liked the way you put it..=) Overall, I love it..=)

don't worry people are reading, well I am anyway. I like this, it has a dark presence which I like. Well done!

Very Good! I loved it! It's so descriptive and I had a vivid image in my mind.Well done.. Would you mind reviewing some of my work? I'm desperate for some constructive critiscm!Thanks~Zoe~