Now THIS, this is fantastic! Stunning. Very to the point. And yet, were it not for your summary, the last line would've surprised me. (You "spoiler" you!) )

Yes, out of great pain comes great art. Has always been true. One day, someday, all the pain will be removed...and we can find great art in happiness and joy. (like you did in Overlooked Majesty)

The greatest book of poetry ever written proves that it can be done as well!

So far this is my favorite of the four I've read. More tomorrow, although I'm greatly tempted to continue on...

Another wonderful poem. great job.

Love it, darling.

that was very beautiful. It went smoothly from one stanza to the next. Good job and keep up the good work.

this is a unique sense of writing that I've never read before. I like it. Keep writing.

Throw my soul down on bended knee.-That was a bloody brilliant up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.