It does seem to drag on...but very good nonetheless. Your summary for this song very true. You have a way with words that someday I hope to accomplish. You are very inspiring. Thank you!

The begining was wonderful, but after awhile it just seemed to drag on. Still a great poem, though.

Whee! You did it again! Can I just erase the copwrite and steal your song? You write the most amazing songs. Yes, sorry for the earlier review, I wrote it before getting it through my dense head that it WAS a song. That's why it would make such a nice one, too. I'd love to hear them. Very badly. Write many, many more.