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| elisefey 2007-01-24 ch 1, | abuseAw... This is such a bittersweet vignette. Very real. I can totally feel her disappointment. Well done! |
| On Eagle's Wings 2006-07-05 ch 1, | abuseAw... poor girl. Very poignant for such a short piece. |
| Idiot Pilot 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abuseAw... yeah. I have an older brother but he is six years older than me and has never had the best friends, but I can definately relate with other relationships I've had. |
| painted stars on blue sky e... 2005-01-17 ch 1, | abuseAw, that was cute. The ending was so disappointing, but still, I liked it. |
| irishgurl 2004-11-24 ch 1, | abuseaww...its kinda sad, but I think it could expand into really great story. I hope you continue with this. I will be waiting for your next post!Please update soon?! |