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Reviews For: The Phone Call

elisefey
2007-01-24
ch 1,
abuseAw... This is such a bittersweet vignette. Very real. I can totally feel her disappointment. Well done!
On Eagle's Wings
2006-07-05
ch 1,
abuseAw... poor girl. Very poignant for such a short piece.
Idiot Pilot
2006-01-01
ch 1,
abuseAw... yeah. I have an older brother but he is six years older than me and has never had the best friends, but I can definately relate with other relationships I've had.
painted stars on blue sky e...
2005-01-17
ch 1,
abuseAw, that was cute. The ending was so disappointing, but still, I liked it.
irishgurl
2004-11-24
ch 1,
abuseaww...its kinda sad, but I think it could expand into really great story. I hope you continue with this. I will be waiting for your next post!Please update soon?!
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