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| Catastrophic Accident 2008-09-28 ch 41,  | abuseThis was amazing from beginning to end. |
| Anon 2008-09-28 ch 41, anon. | abuseLove your story, but I'm confused...how does someone who doesn't legally exist get married? |
| clear vision 2008-08-09 ch 7, | abusethis is starting to sound a lot like the pantheion |
| clear vision 2008-08-09 ch 6, | abuseo.O what happened to the other guys? so far, this story is so-so. there's not a lot of meat. just skin and bones. |
| clear vision 2008-08-09 ch 2, | abuseyou know, this is more like a chapter 2 and the 'prologue' is more like a chapter 1. aren't prologue's just supposed to introduce a bit? and that you don't need to read the prologue to read the rest of the story. and you use the wrong quotation marks for dialog. it should be "these" lol. |
| claireponcherrii 2008-08-05 ch 1, | abuseoh |
| BleedingTwilight 2008-08-05 ch 41, | abuseThis was a great story. I loved your characters and the whole idea. It was very original. I can't wait to read some of your other stories. |
| CaiJen 2008-07-23 ch 41, | abuseI read the whole story all 41 chapters and was blown away! One of my favorite stories and I can't wait to read the sequel. This was great! |
| rockjam 2008-07-18 ch 41, | abuseAWESOME. Loved it. |
| lacy-9 2008-07-08 ch 41, | abuseawesome :] ha. youve almost reached 10 reviews! |
| Dark Angelxx 2008-06-27 ch 41, | abuseah omg you are so amazing! i just finished and this was the most amazing fanfic ever! chase is so amazingly...amazing ah...and the rest of the guys are so sweet...i would kill to be in etta's position haha that was kind of a pun lol anyways i've been reading this fanfic for like 2 days constantly i couldnt stop. yesterday i was up till 2 until the power on my laptop died O_o...you are such an insanely good writer i love it! and i cant wait to read the other stuff you've written about chase and etta! maybe you could do like something with antonio and his relationship with..someone..idk or chase's past as a one shot that'd be interesting. i've totally completely fallen in love with the boys and etta!! i feel like i know them so well all thanks to you...this is my only review for this story but that's cuz i couldnt stop reading to actually review..but really this was awesome! i wanna be in a...mercenary group lol...and the french in this was so sexy!i actually take spanish but reading this made me want to learn french!! i translated on google translate and omg i realized that guys speaking french are insanely sexy...i kinda wish i'd read this story earlier and was there to review from the beginning and show my support but then i realize that i probably would die waiting for the next chapter so i guess that's okay...anyways i should go now and get a bit of sleep :) keep on being amazing and have an amazing summer..you deserve it... an insanely obsessed fan Ayesha |
| November Raine 2008-06-25 ch 41, | abuseOh wow, I LOVED this...It was totally awsome, you did a totally wonderful job with it :D |
| Status-Writing 2008-06-21 ch 41, | abuseThis story was absolutely beautiful! I loved every moment I spent reading it! You should definitely keep writing and I can't wait to read more of your work! [ Status ] |
| sussex 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abusefantastic! finally he's marrying her ;-) |
| Angel-Leigh Jones 2008-05-09 ch 41, | abusehiya i loved this story. great writing. :) angel |