WOW
this story kept me up all night reading. i love it!
you know just how to move the plot along.

the only downside was that Chase was 35 years old! a little too old to be hot, for me atleast :)

Love it love it love it love it love it!

Lol. No really, this is so awesome. Aw. Chase and Etta are soo cute.

Ri

PS> Read it yesterday that's why I'm commenting on chap 1.

OMG! YOUR STORY IS AWESOME! It's so original and really love the storyline! Well DONE!:D

I finally found your story again! Read this story so many times and still not bored of it!

omg, it was the best story that I ever read. Thank you so much :D

i read this story a long time ago, but i rediscovered it and read the whole thing again. i loved it just as much this time, even knowing what would happen in the plot. your characters are fun to read and try to figure out. i love etta's strength as well as her vulnerabilities. chase, that last scene with the two of them, was wonderful to read. i love the bond between all of the guys and how accepting they are with etta. great idea! very original and interesting to read. i was really able to relate to etta's feelings throughout the story

Awesome story!! :)

Read it start to finish!! Loved it!

I can honestly say this is one of the most refreshing stories I have read on fictionpress. I'm not even half way done and I'm already in love with the story. My mind is always racking as to what is going to happen next.

It's well written.

Goish, you did a good job

Ps. I'm very happy for the ability to speak and read french.

This is one of the best stories I have read on Fictionpress, I finished it in 1 day straight, on top of all the work I had to do. It was such a great escape for me, and all the characters were completely likable, a job very well done :)

aw. loved it

Oh my! I think i just died and went to heaven! Posessive Maleness?!?! .> >.< Makes every thing better... Am i Right?! I felt so giddy and couldnt stop reading this story! Good Luck with your writing ! MORE STORIES TO COME!

Amuzed Reader

I loved it! It was so wonderful! I fell in love with chase from the very beginning and it made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside! This story was just what I needed while I'm nursing a broken heart! I really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really loved it! Such a cute story!
Chase's bad boy persona was depicted very well and I really enjoyed the fact that he seemed like a real person. Etta too. I could connect with her and I felt everything she did. Especially when he broke her heart.
This was positively wonderful and I'm glad that I was able to read this and find hope in love again, even if it is fiction.
Pepper...

Great story! I love the characters!

Second time reading this now,and it didnt disappoint :D I love this too much!