Well since I apparently already reviewed for the epilogue chapter I just wanted to point of that it mentions something to do with her dress in the room when in the foyer she is embarrassed about her ratty jeans and t-shirt and also that he gives her a necklace but she already has one of 6 diamonds that represent the 6 team members that she shouldn't really take off so um yeah. But regardless I loved this story all over again, but I don't think you really check up on this any more since you wrote it 5 years ago.

Chase's words. This is most definitely the one lf the most beautiful, most heartwrenching chapter I have ever read and I hope you are proud.

i'm in shock- the ending was unexpected but fitted the story perfectly! i loved the story, i didnt even realise that there where 41 chapters until i got to the end and realised that there wasn't any more! amazing!
charlotte

And this, dear author is precisely why I had to read tbisvstory again. I love the concept, your descriptions, dialogue and the whole thing really. What I don't get though is why she just decided to be ok with her brother again even though he never explained what happened and how she even knew of the existence of a 'team' called la cinq is that supposed to be common knowledge?

WOW
this story kept me up all night reading. i love it!
you know just how to move the plot along.

the only downside was that Chase was 35 years old! a little too old to be hot, for me atleast :)

Love it love it love it love it love it!

Lol. No really, this is so awesome. Aw. Chase and Etta are soo cute.

Ri

PS> Read it yesterday that's why I'm commenting on chap 1.

OMG! YOUR STORY IS AWESOME! It's so original and really love the storyline! Well DONE!:D

I finally found your story again! Read this story so many times and still not bored of it!

omg, it was the best story that I ever read. Thank you so much :D

i read this story a long time ago, but i rediscovered it and read the whole thing again. i loved it just as much this time, even knowing what would happen in the plot. your characters are fun to read and try to figure out. i love etta's strength as well as her vulnerabilities. chase, that last scene with the two of them, was wonderful to read. i love the bond between all of the guys and how accepting they are with etta. great idea! very original and interesting to read. i was really able to relate to etta's feelings throughout the story

Awesome story!! :)

Read it start to finish!! Loved it!

I can honestly say this is one of the most refreshing stories I have read on fictionpress. I'm not even half way done and I'm already in love with the story. My mind is always racking as to what is going to happen next.

It's well written.

Goish, you did a good job

Ps. I'm very happy for the ability to speak and read french.

This is one of the best stories I have read on Fictionpress, I finished it in 1 day straight, on top of all the work I had to do. It was such a great escape for me, and all the characters were completely likable, a job very well done :)

aw. loved it