Me likey. I can reltate to this very much. BTW thanks for the review! It made my _-

I liek it.. especially the ending

Interesting. Yu were obviously pretty stressed man, I liked it. I've been through the same shit, it kinda brings it all back. Keep up the good work. You've written some really moving stuff.

I feel like that about now, definitely can relate. Good poem overall, but you should work a little on your rhythm.