 Jazzie Kings 2005-01-15 . chapter 1Oh my god...i'm speechless that was the most beautiful poem i've ever read. It has an even flow and it didn't bore me for a second, in fact in compelled me to read on. It's amazing how well written this is. It's clear how well your knowledge of myth is. *^_^* Jazzie Kings |
 Quid 2004-12-12 . chapter 1That was one of the best and most beautiful poems I have ever read. |
 clockwork kiss 2004-11-25 . chapter 1Oh. That was absolutely AMAZING. It was beautiful, and the repetion was balanced and forceful, not at all boring or an excuse for a lack of flow. I LOVE this. The use of all the names for the moon and the allusions were incorporated incredibly smoothly, and I especially liked the part about Cassandra. Even though it was long, I didn't get tired of reading or the imagery you used. Just... wow. Definitely a fave piece on this site. |
 LAMBCHOPallTHEtime 2004-11-25 . chapter 1OH MY GOSH THATS THE BEST POEM IVE EVER HEARD! i love it! i especially like how you sort of twisted the wording so it sounds a lot more...cool. And i like how you wrote it in first person and you have REALLY godo vocab. i swear your gonna be the next emily dickinson or edgar allen poe or someone! plz rate one of my poems ^.^! |
 purplemuffin 2004-11-24 . chapter 1wow this poem was just so powerful and flowing, i love the rythem, its just so beautiful |
 Camman 2004-11-24 . chapter 1o! This is so good! I love the whole rhyming and the six line stanzas. It is so awesome! Is it based on something, a story or other work? |
 lronMaiden 2004-11-24 . chapter 1o my god, that was definitely something else. Beautiful, evocative and original (with a couple of spelling mistakes though) and i absolutely loved reading it. Seems like a chant, and would be an amazing song. Two thumbs up and 5 stars and whatever else. Well done. |