Aww, it's adorable. Great job expressing feelings. Nice work.

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hey I really like this poem!

good job D

wowy, nice job getting down the emotion-i'm sure lots of people can relate. i can't, the guy i like doesn't ever really talk to me, so i don't have any words to stumble over. XP have a nice day

Oh this is a really great poem! I'm sure lots of people can relate to it! I'm putting it on Fav's. Great Job!

*sigh* I can relate...

Wow. You just totally described what happens to me. I feel the same exact way if you take out the last two lines. I already know how he feels...

Anyways, really good job. I love it. I'm gonna put it on my Fav. Stories list.

I can tell this ones abotu Drew, right? you do think about him a lot. Keep it up, hang in there, you'll get him.

I LOVE this poem. I feel pretty much the same way. I think it's an awesome poem.

Hehe... I like this one. You were right in saying that it's about teenage love; it is. I do like this, quite a bit. I sure can relate, and I will tell ya, it feels so good, silly, but good. Nice job.

hey! thx for reviewing my story, i really appreciate ur comment, and i'm glad you mentioned it was confusing! hehe the point of the story was actually to confused you haha but thx a lot for the advice! i usually dont write stories like that but my friends did it with me so it was a lot more fun! Sometimes going crazy is just what u need to relieve some stress! hehe well anyways...thx again! i appreciate it!

o nd i really liked this poem...its kind of sad for the girl though...i hope one day she'll be able to tell the guy how she feels! nd hopefully it'll be a happy ending!