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| Peachez 24 2004-12-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell, I think that was quite lovely actually. And here you thought it was a bomb... *shakes head* You need more confidence gurl. Anyway, keep writing!! Peachez ^_~ |
| sam 2004-11-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseUm... Iris is the only one that's confusing me. Where is the father (I guess the father is..*Smacks head against wall* Yes! I remember now, chaos (can't spell worth my life)). Besides that, this story was great! *Glares* though, I’m not too happy that you toke Dark down. *Sighs* oh well, anyway, have you ever read the vampire diaries by L.J. Smith? well, the story line about two vampire, One representing good and the other bad, fighting over a human is about the same. The only difference is the good one got her in the story. |