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| the.pink.life 2005-07-14 ch 1,  | abuseThis is nice, but one thing I would suggest would be give more examples of what it is (like you did with the embrace and having exact change) and don't have as many mentions of not having to say it b/c words aren't enough. That's all. Nice work, though. I like the subject matter. :) |
| CryNowLaughLater 2005-04-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou are a very talented writer and all of your work is brilliant, but this. I believe is your best work on that i have read. It's so Pure and Beautiful. You capture the emotion so genuinly, it's just so...innocent. Nice Job. Bravo! |
| JenniRose 2005-03-28 ch 1, | abuseI loved that, it was really good. |
| Unholy Haven 2005-03-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is good, it has a very soft and inspirational feel to it. |
| origamikitty 2004-11-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good! And I'm glad that in the end you didn't completely come out and say what it was :) |