This is great! I love it, especially since it urges you to keep reading by getting better with each stanza. ^_^ The last one is like... *the Italian finger-kiss* Like that. lol some things (especially amongst Italians such as myself) just can't be typed. ;) "He knows chirp, twitter"--that's my favorite part, after all you said before. Oh, and one more thing--I thought the CSA was something you tried to get into but didn't get accepted, but here it says you did it there. ?? Did you finally get there? That's awesome if you did. ;) Thanks for the nice work AGAIN! ^_^

This is amazingly good. I envy that sparrow, the lucky creature, if only because in his world alarm clocks don't exist.