oh, i know how you feel... well expressed, great poem.

I like the general concept but, honestly, I don't like the way it's written. A little choppy, if you will, for my tastes. Still, it is a nice poem, especially the topic. All in all, kudos!

aw! that's depressing but of course i can relate to that. it's really cool poem. keep up the good work! and if you could review some of my stuff that would be awesome!