|Reviews for Whitney Joy McConnell: First Crush|
| kmctinkerbell 1/8/06 . chapter 6
omg! i really really liked it! you should defiantly get Luke and Whitney together, and make melanie be a better friend for whittney!
| Abby Sequioa 5/26/05 . chapter 6
write more write more! what happens what happens?
| Treg 12/5/04 . chapter 6
i dont like the girl thats been insulting her... evil wench..like my cat, lol...yum yum, toastt..lol, anyway, dont change her! i like her just the way she is! screw nick!
| Treg 11/29/04 . chapter 5
ugh/ what a fake melanie is. . shes no good. whitney needs some new friends.
| miniskye 11/28/04 . chapter 1
I'm sure your story is great but the summary makes it sound dumb. Umm I have an older sister and my friends are trying to ruin my life and it isnt that hard.
| Treg 11/27/04 . chapter 4
hey! im thirteen, and i had a b/f! is this ur way of telling me something? * squints eyes at u* i can see what ur doing...lol, jk, jk!o, i gte the feeling nick likes her! eww, i would have rather that cody likes her, cuz, theres this boy in my class named nick, and hes, kinda horrbily...something.. anyways, lol, and um... yes, french sux. it is horrilbe. and the englsih teachers speaking french have this horrible nasyly accent. EW THEY DONT SAY JÁI jé. they say it LIKE jAY or . . later.
| Treg 11/27/04 . chapter 3
WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH SKIRTS AND DRESSES?lol...umm...hehehe...ok, why is she homescholeed? oy vey! thats not how u spell it, but i dont know whow to!ok,. thats pretty much all ihave t say write about . all r9ght then. sure. . righteo. cheerio!
| Treg 11/26/04 . chapter 2
oh, thats not fun. thats mean. leaving her out like that. If it were me, ther would be a cat fight later, lol.
| Treg 11/25/04 . chapter 1
hehe, i have a girl called melanie..in one of my stories!lol.. see, this * points to ur head, then points back to mine* is the same.. 2 OF A KIND! lol, im tellin u!