O...this is a _very_ good poem. I like it a lot. The way it went was very deep. Keep up the good work, Ash-chan. :)

I like how you compared your feelings to dangerous waters. I guess thats a metaphor? We're learning on writing metaphors in Language Arts. Shane wanted to compare a Grape and Danger. -blinks- -slaps forehead- We started out by doing a Desk and Danger... Tony's idea... -slams head on computer desk- Maybe if I keep doing this, I will get a migrane, and will only hear the pounding of blood to my brain...