beautiful...iv never been used before, but this is such a great poem with so much emotion in each word...i luv your format!

i think that this is so cool. well written and all...and it sounds like something that happened to me. i can really relate to this.lazi

Je! This girl sounds like a total b*h! What a loser! What kind of 'Friends' step over you to get a GUY? Seriously! I didn't think that ANY guy was worth losing a friendship over. Me and My bf both liked the same guy and we agreed that it was fair game, he picks, no fighting, and we made a pact that HE doesn't get in the way of our lifelong friendship. And we stuck to it! But jez! To USE your best friend to get a GUY! That is so lame! Anyway, great poem! I like the way you wrote like one word over the other. That really added some emotion to the screen! Luv it! I would have been icyer twords the hell's angel you called you friend, but this was cool! She'll get hers! GREAT POEM!

Okay... I LOVED IT! This is most certainly your best!! Way ta go!

Ren

i have to say i loved the way you used the different styles of writing to put down different things. this was great i loved the flow and it hurts to be betrayed, know exactly how you feel, you said this very well.lots of love ~AllyCred~

Whoa. Amazed. This is great, i have rarely seen such emotion put into a poem or such a a skill when it comes to structure, the mixture between blank verse and a more structured verse was very well done and the transition was seemless. This is just great-Keith Andrew

I realy liked this, you're short and snappy and you don't drown on and on.

the way you broke up the lines was very inventive. I think it makes you take it in better. gets the point across well and leaves you with a helpless feeling well done

I've never read a poem like this, but I have to say that I liked this. It had a flow all of its own.

Keep it up.

It was weird, strange, but kinda interesting and exciting

I really liked this. Every line was true...every word menat something to me...you understand. And your one of the few that can tell the story in just the right way.Sol Ana IliaraAKA Shado...please R&R one of mine if u get a chance?

Well...The commas after every word are a bit much. But I know what it's like to have a friend lie to you like that. Well not exactly like that. But close enough to be able to relate. Excellent writing. You could get paid for this stuff, you know.

i tink dats top and its so tru frnds can b lik dat.i trust those hu r trust worthy.love the way u keep dialougue going and reflect real thoughts that we all hve bt nevr mention

This was... wow. I have no words. Again, really truthful and gripping. Catches you right at the beginning, and cradles you in a beautiful story. This was a really creative peice, greatly done.

I liked this poem, I think you have a very good knack (or however you spell it) for capturing emotions that are especially cynical and bitter. I personally liked how you used commas in thos last couple of stanzas to make it sound more staccato. Also, The way you used italics, bold, and normal to add emphasize. Good poem, indeed. :)