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| Letters to No One 2004-11-25 ch 1,  | abuseYou write much as I do. I like that. This is a lovely poem, probably because it contains such truth. You fall for someone, worry if it's right, worry about the pain that might be the result of loving them, and keep falling anyways. Nicely written. |
| Saeger 2004-11-25 ch 1, | abuseAmen to that... Seen (and felt) it happen so many times... Well put, well written, and expressive. Good job. |
| Amethyst Eyed Cynical One 2004-11-25 ch 1, | abuserisk=hurt.so true.but if we dont take risks all our lifes we'll be likw what if?a very thought-provoking poem.i really like it. |