sarcasm makes a great poem taste so tart. i love it. =D the rhyming was very well done.+cat

nice... i agree the worlds getting just too apathetic...

love this, especially the last line. Rhyme scheme was good, and the message is one i've been trying to pass around for years, though not so much with the written word.

haha! Speaks truth. I like lines 10-14. Oh gee, Oh well. Good work.