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| ForgottenRiver 2005-01-02 ch 1,   | :( You have a younger sib, too? Its sad when people do this sort of thing...let down the people who love them the most. And in the end, they're put out of sight and out of mind...I guess that's just the deserving punishment for those kinds of mistakes. Very well done. ~FR |
| simpleplan13 2004-11-25 ch 1, | wow.. Im sorry you feel that way... but nice poem |
| L8J14S92 2004-11-25 ch 1, | That is so true about older brothers. Mine to. Your not alone. That was a really good poem. I liked it. |