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| shadow-spirit 2007-05-12 ch 1,  | abuseintersting - very empathic, i like the ideas that the looks leave scars - very poiniant |
| Aryante 2004-11-25 ch 1, | abuseoh, wow. That's pretty much all I can say. The expression, the meaning... It's wow... |
| HannahMarie*Willow 2004-11-25 ch 1, | abuseWow. That really made me think and feel sorry for the person in this poem. I like the end few lines where it turns to the people making judgements and tells them they shouldn't. |
| Marth Azumi 2004-11-25 ch 1, | abuseGod, I really liked this one. Not too bad. |
| Kanna-Void-Master 2004-11-25 ch 1, | abusethat was beautiful. i like it alot. It rushed through me and reminded me of one of my friends. awesome |
| Vanish 2004-11-25 ch 1, | abuseHarsh! It's so tragic but good third-person point of view of the girl. I also liked how you described the "**" as a girl instead of using woman because it kind of gives the feel of ironic innocence. Well written. |