I can't figure out whether this is saying "it's ok to cry, if that's how you truly feel" or "stop crying and look at what you can learn from this experience".

But to clear up the line in that poem I wrote, the fourteenth day of the second winter month is Valentine's Day, which me and the person I was with for more than a year didn't spend together because we were broken up.

So now that I cleared that up for you, can you clear this up for me? Either way, I think it's a cute poem.

I love the last line. "And see what you're doing to you." No one ever phrases it like that. Booya. *high five*

This was great! I loved the whole aspect of the poem! keep it up!

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*reads the poem twice* ... I should print this out and keep reminding myself to do that. Breath. *adds poem to favourite's list*

Wow, it's been a really freaking long time since I've been on fictionpress...ah well. Review time. You know I like this ^_^

I like this a lot, sometimes we all need to take a moment and just stop. Very nicely written too.