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| Prisoner-11 2006-04-09 ch 3,  | abuseAww man! Lol, it took me five minutes to get 'you're the only Ten I see'...I'm so lame... I hope to be able to read more! |
| Ayakaishi Fei 2005-10-07 ch 3, anon. | abuseLOL. I like Maya. I think I remember that rebellious stage. Although I never slept with a gay guy (kissed a couple and ended up in bed with them after a party but that's a whole 'nother story). But I like this - Maya's sister is a **. Looking forward to reading more, and seeing how everything develops. Angelo is so different in this story. Anyway, nicely written, can't wait for more! |
| Lightgirl1 2005-03-03 ch 1, | abuseNice but a little confusion on the characters. Plz try to make characters more clear. :) |
| Naomi Schemer 2005-03-03 ch 3, | abuseCatholic familys kill me. I can't say I really know anyone that prejudiced, so it's creepy. I really like Maya though, she's cool. I wish I had a gay best friend...why can't there be more gay guys at my school? Three is not enough! |
| Jaded Breeze 2005-02-18 ch 2, anon. | abuseUpdate soon. I like twhere this is going. it was interesting to read about the dancing. You dont see/read much dancing anymore. |
| Liebe Sasa 2005-02-07 ch 1, | abuseSo, it wouldn't let me review chapter two again. Basically, I think you just revised it except for maybe adding a bit to the end, but I like it. I'm curious about this new character, as well. Hoping that some more character development will be headed our way. Update soon! ~Sasa |
| stickyplaster 2005-01-30 ch 1, | abusewow! this is realy good and well written and all that :D |
| indie wave 2004-11-30 ch 2, | abusequite interesting...i'll be following this one. |
| Liebe Sasa 2004-11-30 ch 2, | abuseHmm Interesting. I'll have to watch this. ~Sasa |
| K. T. Wood 2004-11-27 ch 2, | abuseI like the story thus far. Very interesting. Got kinda confused in the second chapter. But anyways- kinda tired atm, or would have given much better review! I really did like this, keep up with it. See ya |
| Naomi Schemer 2004-11-25 ch 2, | abuseCute, update soon! |