i like the dramatic impact you create using the punctuation, awesome. your language is phenomenal too, especially the way you use language and literary devices to craft your poetry. (woo cheem)

Hrm. I wrote a poem somewhat like that entitled "the prince and the pauper" but i think i disliked it, so i deleted it. I've learnt my lesson now-don't delete anything. I feel like I've lost a part of me or something.

love it or hate it,i pick the former.it's brilliant, really,and a wonderful mix-and-matchof fantastic literature.it's very much of think-write style,but hey, it's good.what can i say?i like it like it like it.period.-kismet.

hi, the purpose is um unclear, but otherwise it's very interesting how you present iago and norton. You might consider making a compilation of such poems to emphasize on the different ways that people kill...thus linking and lending focus also to content and message.

fascinating, truly fascinating.Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.