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| really 2005-01-16 ch 1, | i like the dramatic impact you create using the punctuation, awesome. your language is phenomenal too, especially the way you use language and literary devices to craft your poetry. (woo cheem) |
| extras 2005-01-08 ch 1, | Hrm. I wrote a poem somewhat like that entitled "the prince and the pauper" but i think i disliked it, so i deleted it. I've learnt my lesson now-don't delete anything. I feel like I've lost a part of me or something. |
| negligible fictional force 2004-11-27 ch 1, | love it or hate it,i pick the former.it's brilliant, really,and a wonderful mix-and-matchof fantastic literature.it's very much of think-write style,but hey, it's good.what can i say?i like it like it like it.period.-kismet. |
| unomi 2004-11-25 ch 1, | hi, the purpose is um unclear, but otherwise it's very interesting how you present iago and norton. You might consider making a compilation of such poems to emphasize on the different ways that people kill...thus linking and lending focus also to content and message. |
| Faithless Juliet 2004-11-25 ch 1, | fascinating, truly fascinating.Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |