|Reviews for June Mermaid|
| moonardordragon 3/14/06 . chapter 1
this is really pretty
| kayttea 2/15/05 . chapter 1
aw, that's nice. i love the ending. :) very good poem. i like how i can really envisualize(sp? lol) it.
| Terrafauna 12/31/04 . chapter 1
I really liked that one... beautiful language!
| DarkPharaoh1666 12/27/04 . chapter 1
Interesting poem, well done.
| arwen-galadriel2 12/19/04 . chapter 1
KK I can definitely see the girl. Why June mermaid? It certainly doesn't sound like June, more like November, unless of course you live at the north pole like you do :P. keep up w/ the good descriptions, I'll look out for more.
| quietlyhidden 12/8/04 . chapter 1
...wow...tat was good and I can really see the image of the mermaid and feel her emotions
| Rara Punk 12/8/04 . chapter 1
So lonely, it's very well written. To me, the lines "Echoes of the past
Within the mists
No other sound is heard." are so full of emptiness. Great - keep writing!
| tyrantvirus 12/7/04 . chapter 1
This is a really pretty poem. I like the descriptions and how you were able to capture the lonelyness. Good job.
| Dying Without Gackt 12/6/04 . chapter 1
That's really sweet and I really like the title. Also thanks for reading my story...I'll remind you for the next chap...but you can put me in author alerts (only if you want to) to know as well...but I'll still tell you.
| Silver Phoenix Falling 12/6/04 . chapter 1
Thanks for reviewing my poem ("Trees"); I really appreciate it!
Great poem! I love how you've painted a picture that's sad, but so beautiful at the same time. I don't know why, but it reminds me somewhat of the tune of "The Lady of Shalott (sp?)" by Loreena McKennitt.
| A Perfect Circle 12/5/04 . chapter 1
Wow, very expressive and emotional. Could make a man/woman think about a girl like that, or an occasion where something like that happened. Very nice.
| zzocco 11/30/04 . chapter 1
wow this is good. its so sad. ( reminds me of the little mermaid movie (the one with real people). i cried in the end of it. like how the rythm flows and easy to recite.
| LimelightOfDawn 11/29/04 . chapter 1
Thanks a lot for your review of my poem! I loved this one of yours. It was sadly beautiful. I especially loved the lines:
"Alone she still sits
Waiting, still waiting
For dawn to break."
Really pretty! :D
| Loki Mischeif-Maker 11/27/04 . chapter 1
Wow. Good. To quote one word from the poem that kind of sums it up: "bittersweet". You know, he left, but she's willing to wait for him to come back. Right?
All in all, a good poem. Since I can't really criticize poetry, let's leave it at that.
PS Thanks for reviewing So Called Innocence and Thief's Honor.
| Free-Writer 11/26/04 . chapter 1
this was wonderful. I really like the serenity the poem put across.