I like how you turn the notion of a lie into an object, like a lamp, or a car. You discribe laying them (the lie) out in the sun to let them become succulent for you. It's a very powerful notion, like fattining a pig up before slaughtering it to improve the taste.

I miss your writing, I've been reading some of your poems, and trying to find a piece that I haven't reviewed. It makes me miss it even more :(

Post more soon if you can.

Much love,

Juliet.

I like it because you're using similes to describe evil lies told to you that you just swallow. Very good. Read and review some of my stuff please. Thanks

I'm not sure what I think of this. I kind of wish it went into a bit more detail, though I got from it how easy it is to want blissful lies instead of cold, hard fact. I think I like Silence

odd poem. just... different.