Reviews for Dracula's One True Love

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kAIT REDFERN 2005-04-25 ch 3,	abuseO, going off with him she's naughty. Good to see a vampire story on here and I like the way she kinda stood up to him at the beginning. This is cool. Update.
Ahemait 2005-04-02 ch 3,	abuseholy hell! lookie at what i found, it's a penname: x0x Arsenic And Lace x0xhahahahahahhahahhahahhahahha! -runs off laughing and falls over after a little while and continues to laugh until rapid weiner dogs come and eat me-
born-again 2005-03-21 ch 3,	abuseBrilliant, I hope you write some more!
Ahemait 2005-03-16 ch 1,	abuseoh wow! does spiff know you're using this? e. -throws piece of paper that reads 'read 'when youre not looking' or die!' on it and runs away making whooshing sounds-
candycorn22 2005-03-12 ch 3,	abuseyou're a busy little bee, aren't you? you've added...a little...in a long time. again, i say you need to update. make the stories longer and the poems...however different you can without changing a lot. ps--nice poem at the beginning. what does the part about dakota ice have to do with anything?
Broken Melody 2005-03-08 ch 3,	abuseComands you to write more!
aiur 2005-03-07 ch 3,	abuseshort chapters! it'd be nice to see some longer ones. but i like how you get the plot moving right away. i mean - obviously she's gotta be bitten and all that. so you haven't dragged that out; you've gotten the obvious over with. and the flow's great; the sequence of events is really believable. i would have liked more of a connection from chapter one to this one, though, and also more development, more of your amazing description going on as they're dancing. keep going, though! =) good work. like i said, i'm way too picky for my own good as a reader. ~k8
aiur 2005-03-07 ch 2,	abusethe mention of vampires caught my mind. i just read Dracula for my english class. shrugs so maybe i still have the creatures on the brain a little. i love your descriptions. they're clear and well put-together. and i love how you punctuate everything correctly so all your sentences flow seamlessly. i would have liked more expansion, though, about andrea's thoughts. i mean - to me it just seemed like she assumed the count was attracted to her. all her thoughts seemed really random. i didn't think they flowed quite right. they told too much, revealed too much. and they didn't make sense, to me. i don't know. could be just me. probably was just me. i'm so picky when i read. but anyways i'm reading on. ~k8
C814Gucla 2005-03-07 ch 2,	abusenice, but make it longer.
C814Gucla 2005-03-07 ch 1,	abuseyou know the whole 'love' thing really isn't my scene, but i liked readin' this. good piece o' fiction, this. keep it goin'.
Broken Melody 2005-02-10 ch 2,	abuseWow cool! Though I think you should make the chapter longer and explain how she was reborn or whatever! I guess you could do that in the next chapter... Well I hope you continue...
Broken Melody 2005-02-10 ch 1,	abuseI have been reading lots of your writing since you reveiwed mine... well actually just a few poems and this. Oh do write more, I love how you describe everything. I like the first start of your story! I love vampires and werewolves... though werewolves probably will not be in your story. I think I shall put you on my Author Alert list, so I can read more of this. Until than though I read the next chapter!Oh uh good chapter!
nooneukno 2005-02-01 ch 2, anon.	abusethat's it? that's sad. i should yell at you for not keepin' it up, but i wont 'cause then you could just stop it to get back at me, which would be bad. just please keep it up
nooneukno 2005-02-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseholy **, that's good! ya've got a good idea, but it's kinda freaky too, dracula actually falling in love...k then, keep it up, and i'm gonna read the next chapter!
candycorn22 2005-01-31 ch 2,	abusethis is pretty good, andrea. you've got an interesting idea and a compelling title.

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