Again very well written and it flows together perfectly. Keep writing.

I don't see where you got the title (other than a box), but the poem is pretty good. Another title for it could be 'No Desparation', but I doubt you'll change it. Its fine as it is.

Very inspiring. good job. Julianne

I definitely like this one. There is a nice flow to the poem, and it is very powerful. Great job!