My god the the best story ever.

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I really enjoyed reading this piece of work because ,other thani in the beginning, the flow of it was really nice and the imagery was great. I felt like I could see it all happening before my eyes, You know? well good job and keep it up.

this piece of work was amazing i hope to see more like it. keep it up

Wow, that was really good. Great job.

Despite the formatting problems and one or two flow problems, this was really good. I have to admit, being a former cutter myself, my throat constricted because you hit so close to home. You use the supernatural to capture that state of mind, and I really appreciate it. Good work.

I absoulutly love this. Its brilliant. I like how they speak and the whole rhythm of it was beautiful. Creepy but beautiful.