the ending was sad. but your writing style is awesome! i was totally into the story.

This was very chilling. And horribly sad. It really makes you think--and wonder. "You’re sick in the mind. It is against the laws of nature, to worship a cousin beyond paternal or family love." And her sudden "betrayal" was written of fabulously. Very very nice.

Hmm...yeah. People can be so full of themselves sometimes. Griff deserved what happened to him. Nice one!

It was indeed interesting, especially the ending ^-^

POOr Griff! I liked that character.:D. this was sad, but i still loved it. Good job! CAn't wait to see moer!

I lov your story, especially the discriptions, but have u ever seen a real sword fight? Some of the 'discrptions' of their short fight were a little off. Pleas write more!!

ps: tanks for reviewing my story

Wow, interesting story. I never pictured Griff coming to an ending like that. Wow, you totally caught me offguard! LoL! Nice one-shot though! ^.^

oo i liked and i didn't expect the ending at all.

*Silent Writer*