 Dustbunnys13 2006-02-26 . chapter 9Another nice story! |
 Image of the Invisible 2005-07-05 . chapter 9sorry dear, i just found the time to read it all now. wow. you did finish it! lol. good work cris! (= |
 topsecret32 2005-04-01 . chapter 9wah! *cry cry* its so simple... and yet im so inlove with it! omg...wow...*sniff* its so short, but practically every chapter i cried u know! ur so good wit words...*sniff* now look wat u made me do! amm my tissues are finished...*stares at the pile of tissue on d floor..erlack* |
 Amanda Michelle 2005-03-27 . chapter 9wow...what a great story! its lyk the first one i've read in lyk ever that had a happy ending! lol I loved it! Great job! |
 LcT514 2005-03-27 . chapter 9i like it !! ahhahaha sorry about the name thing drake and jake...they sound alike. is this the end ?! isthere going to be an epilogue? |
 Shahr 2005-03-26 . chapter 9No! That was perfect. And I loved it. You know it would be cool if you wrote a sequel *smiles thoughtfully* but that's your choice of course. :D |
 Nut 2005-03-26 . chapter 9nice ending. i'm glad she went with drake in the end! really great story, awesome work. |
 Bloodshot 2005-03-26 . chapter 8update soon! this is a good story. |
 Nut 2005-03-25 . chapter 8this chapter was really well written. and yes, i'll check out some of your other stuff as soon as i can. great work! |
 Shahr 2005-03-24 . chapter 8Hmm. No, I don't think you are going too fast here. But I feel so sorry for Kris. She's in the middle, and doesn't know what to do. :( Oh, and from this point I'd take it a bit slowly. Of course that's my opinion. But you can do as you like. :D UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! |
 LcT514 2005-03-24 . chapter 8AWW !! JAKE SHOULD END UP WITH KRIS ! COME ON !! JAKE DONT GIVE UP LOL! |
 Shahr 2005-03-22 . chapter 7I liked the revised chapter better. And this is a great chapter as well! :D UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! |
 Nut 2005-03-22 . chapter 7nice. that was really good. i hate cliffhangers, but that was a great way to end the chapter. and as for the revised chapter 6, you improved it a lot. it's fantastic. you're a great writer, keep it up! |
 Emilea 2005-03-21 . chapter 7AAH!! no! dont just STOP there. neway. heh. we both write sorta short chappies. i am gan leave mi story unupdated for longer but i will write long chappies so readers do not feel dissatisfied or cheated or nething like that. wow. i have 18 reviews.
i feel so uber-li great and superbli warm. heh. neway. i hav heaps of hw to do. argh. neway. i like ur story a LOT so keep up da gewd work. ur so in mi author alert fingi! so keep writing and mebbe write longer chappies. i dno. jst a thought. heh. mwah!!
babe anjwl.x |
 Emilea 2005-03-20 . chapter 6ok. it is a lil dramatic. u cud get lots more chappies out of this story if u kind slow things down a bit and don't kinda make things so RUSHED. this is a great idea and everything jst dun let it be so BOOM and then BAM. heh.
update soon i like your ideas in this story. cud u plz read mi storee? its called Miss self sufficient. i just started. its got a prologue and a chappie. heh. and make ur chappies a lil longer too kkz? keep up da awesome work. btw, plz review me 2!!
babe anjwl.x |