I liked this alot, and reread it three times. It has a really nice finish, and ?ambience? that I like.

*cries* so sad. so beautiful! poor Vincent. For once I pity the vampire.

I really like how you give almost no detail as to what happened. Very nice.

Well, Vincent isn't the only one to believe that he didn't belong at that funeral. Well, anyhow. I'm glad even he understands that he's asleep.

This is great. The ending is cool, it adds that extra 'creepyness' to it...Well written-write on!

This is achingly lovely. You left just enough for the readers to interpret. I'm wondering, are you continuing this?