|Reviews for Betraying Yourself|
| S0ulSearching 5/6/05 . chapter 1
*cheers* This is awsome! I love it...it's so accurate...love the imagery...Keep it up.-pammy-
| Whatever-I-Say 4/24/05 . chapter 1
wow...this is an amazing poem not only is it written beautifully but you've captured me with your words, and that I can relate to it somehow. Good job and Keep writing!
| Mirwen 3/28/05 . chapter 1
Very nice. I love it! Oh, and the bio thing... it was borrowed from one of my friends' xangas, so no, not off yours. -Miir
| Saiai 3/26/05 . chapter 1
One of the many reasons why I like your work is because you usually hit close to home when it comes to how I feel. Kind of weird sometimes but it makes me feel less lonely. Congrats on another fine piece of work.
| Siberia82 1/26/05 . chapter 1
So introspective and moving. I like your choice of words. It's a hard lesson to learn, but at least you were willing to admit that you were wrong; not everyone can do that.
| xHannahx 1/3/05 . chapter 1
i know the feeling, sometimes you have to say what you need, however much its going to hurt the other person. nice job,
| catseyeview 12/30/04 . chapter 1
Beautiful web of lines that weaves what guilt does to the person on the opposite end. Really both are victims of cruel fate of what can't be. "I blink back tears as you walk away, thinking desperately of something to say."
| Eagle Seance 12/18/04 . chapter 1
oh that's so sad! it's great how the reader is instilled with the same emotions as if this was a story. excellent work is all i can say! write on.
| Nails For Your Crucifix 11/27/04 . chapter 1
It's been too long since I've read any of your work. I was surpised by this. It has a nice flow and there's just something about it that I can relate too. Been there, done that.
| simpleplan13 11/27/04 . chapter 1
wow.. very powerful and beautifully written.. thanks for your review
| Untame Spirit 11/26/04 . chapter 1
Another beauty. It's set up very nicely, and I can see the scene playing out in front of me.
Love the third stanza.