 Embryonic Love 2004-11-27 . chapter 1wow, great poem..its so much different from the rest. (thats a good thing)the only question i have is in the third verse you say:
Peach, cinnamon, lavender, indigo Neon, pink, cyan, turquoise Khaki, olive, peach, and chartreuse
and peach was used twice.:P other than that, great poem. |