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| Jeff 2005-01-19 ch 1,  | Very cool, all of the colors remind me of my crayons, and the end is just an excellent way to put yourself apart from everyone else. great choice of creativity. Wonderful |
| Keith Andrew 2004-11-30 ch 1,  | very original and well written, i also have to compliment you on your vocabulary of colours, thats really astounding. _keith Andrew |
| Embryonic Love 2004-11-27 ch 1, | wow, great poem..its so much different from the rest. (thats a good thing)the only question i have is in the third verse you say: Peach, cinnamon, lavender, indigo Neon, pink, cyan, turquoise Khaki, olive, peach, and chartreuse and peach was used twice.:P other than that, great poem. |