I love the poem. Its adorable, just like Mika. However, it needs another couplet. You have an odd number of couplets, and, although during the poem there is a musical quality, it destroys the rhythm and leaves the reader wanting another couplet.

Very sweet... reminds me of my pets! I love it!

Nice little slice of life; cats are nice to have aroundsirius chathamps r/r my stuff too

Aw. Cats are just so cuute. I love my two little, black kitties to death. Anyways, great poem!

Daphne