This is a really good poem. Keep it writing. I love this. Short, but real good.

It gives a faint sign of hope, and I like that people still believe that! It flowed really nicely and it is defenitely on of my favs! I like it alot!

You make shadows seem good and almost make the light something to fear.

I think this poem is really good.

Keep it up.

u make shadows seem good, i thought ppl always asume shadows are bad- or did i miss something in ur poem?