Reviews for We Both Reached For the Gun

Reviews For: We Both Reached For the Gun

the.vulture 2008-05-30 ch 1,	abuseI know it's been a while since this was written, but whatever. This is a really good story, very well written and action-packed!
Vivian Rose Pierce 2006-02-17 ch 1,	abuseAn interesting story. I look forward to more. (Thank you for the review) Also, about the woman-hood question...erm...well. If you're going technical, then I suppose whenever the girl hits puberty. But I'm nineteen and have only started to really feel like an actual woman, even though I've long since hit puberty. That is all.
degenerate elite rabbit 2006-01-18 ch 1,	abusehey. thanks for the reviews. it's nice to know someone likes the utter crap i write. i am a very chaotic person when i write, so it comes out that way easily.i've never been one for conformaty so your use of words intrigues me and delights me. you got a knack. i see potential. cultivate it, man. good luck.
Rovandin 2006-01-05 ch 1,	abuseNifty. I like it. Continue. I like the maion charc alot. He's kinda funny.
ThePrue 2006-01-03 ch 1,	abuseThis was a great story. I personaly enjoy the character, and how life-like you made him.
Dragons Jinx 2005-12-06 ch 1,	abuseYou know, ya`ll have me flattered. Two awsome writters before you reviewed my story, and i was like 'wow, they like my stuff' and now you review after writting THIS? i`m gonna get so full of myself there will be no living with me! i love this story! the plot, the whole concept, the fact that even though you don`t know waht`s going on...you do. this was great and i hope you write more of it! thanks for your review! i should be updating soon, have the next xhappie planned out already^_^ and the story is going into a romance...but ya might have already figured that out.
Sita Fuoco 2005-05-19 ch 1,	abuseAbsolutely wonderful... I love these kind of stories... morbidly descriptive, and even though it was a bit frightening, deffinately a great read. Awesome job. i wish you'd post more of your writing... because id love to read more. Okay well yeah nice job! *~Sita
Arrow's Flight 2005-04-27 ch 1,	abuseThis is quite gripping. . . poor guy. Er. . . actually maybe not. What's going to happen to him? Thank you so much for adding me to your favorite author's list. -Arrow's flight-
Donnatella 2005-01-03 ch 1,	abusegood story. like it.now..plz tell me ur last name isnt McCartney.mystery
aknightsgoldenrose 2004-12-19 ch 1,	abuseNice descriptions. I noticed a few mistakes here and there but nothing major. Keep up the great work.
DrunkenMonkeyKing 2004-12-16 ch 1,	abuseVery nice. Great opening, a great feel for the character, some very good action, you definitely got a good thing going here. The one thing I could tell you to watch out for is to try and get your grammar a touch better. Like I said, you got some great writing in here and I'd hate to see someone ignore it just because they wrote you off for bad grammar.
fran 2004-11-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseOh yes oh yes oh yes we both oh yes we both oh yes we both reached for the gun the gun the gun the gun oh yes we both reached for the gun for the gun! woo
Silver Chaos 2004-11-27 ch 1,	abuseWow! The descriptions were really good, and I liked how you kept questioning! I would complain that it's too short, but there doesn't seem to be any need to explain. You just leave it to the imagination. Very good!
Gaki Toki 2004-11-27 ch 1,	abuse...interesting and my lil cuz is here so I'll have to read it fully later...good job w/the first paragraph though...

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