Wow. This is great. Beautiful and deep. Very nice ending. ~IWishIWereADragon

i like this its amazing and i know how it feels...i'm surprised you can write so well about something that you havent been through...well done signs of a great writer here. lots of love ~AllyCred~

If poems like this could change the world, you capture so deeply that pain, the language strong and emotionally evocative...Nice work again.

I am reading all your poems, as you can see.And each one is giving me chills.

WOW! That rocks. That was just awesome all teh words fit with eachother and just was great.