Wow...that put me close to tears.

It was completely and totally emotional, but not in a gooey, yucky way, like chocolate when it's all melty because it's been sitting in your pocket on the hottest day of summer. It was amazing.

Man...I want to paint now...it's too late, though, and I'm supposed to be doing homework. \

I don't really know what to say...I think I spotted a typo or two, but that's all my critique. Like always and forever, beautifully imagery!

i feel like crying now.

that was beautiful.

along with everything else you write.

"dreamcatcher shaped like a pentagram"?

am i reading the beautiful work

of a fellow wiccan?

I (heart) this story Maisha! I vaguely remember you sending everyone a paragraph or two of the beginning of this to everyone sometime last year.

Anyway, I thought I'd read this so that I could avoid my AP History homework. Sadly, there comes a point when we must do it. :(

...Just beautiful. I have nothing more to say.

incredible.

Extraodinary, as per usual. I wouldn't expect anything else! And I love this piece! it's all-emotional, but not in a sappy yucky pukey way, like most emotional pieces, it's emotional in a good way! Anywhoo, may your ink never run out, and paper always be plentiful!